Complications
By Miztaken4beauty
So boy meets girl it''s as clique as it goes,
and anyone who''s experienced
it already knows,
That love is a battle and we all have to fight,
To have what we want and to set the world right.
The boy
is in love, and has been for so long,
The girl is cold, and her walls
are so strong.
A chance meeting occurred to set the stage,
For
heartache, drama, and a bit of rage.
The boy lost his lover,
love struck the girl.
the simple, most complicated thing in the
world.
Life carries on with obstacles in the air,
And God,
she just wishes he were there,
But trapped in the past, he''ll never
move on,
He won''t realize it until she''s already gone.
And she'll walk away and never look back,
realizing a heart is
a terrible thing to lack.
And his heart has become so confused,
He loves not only one now, but two!
The girl she falters,
worried sick,
She gave him her heart far too quick.
The boy
is lost and has to choose,
Which of the two he’s willing to lose.
And the girl idles, honest and sad,
He’s the best and worst
she’s ever had.
She looks to the future and wants to stay,
Where
before she’d have just ran away.
The boy has time to make
up his heart,
And then he and another must part.
So either way,
two hearts will break,
Depending on whichever path he takes.
It all began with the three questions game,
Now will anything ever
be the same?
She had a firm shoulder, and he a friendly face,
But it wasn''t the time and it wasn’t the place.
Comments on "Complications"
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A former member wrote:
great flow.. I love this peice... Love your writings... ;)
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On Saturday, April 17, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(176) wrote:
Thank you =]
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On Friday, April 9, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Well done, great flow, so nice to read.... thanks... Boys and girls, love and misery, can't have one without the other... unless you live in a fairy tale.. write on
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A former member wrote:
I've been the boy in this story, in the end there are 3 hearts broken, excellent content, great flow. I read this one twice over.
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On Friday, April 9, 2010, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
what a sad piece. I'd definitely have a hard time waiting and hoping to be the "chosen" one...though if it ever came to that...i'd rather just leave. my opinion though.. definitely lovely flow to this piece. nice write