Lost in your eyes

By Dreamzz

Looking everywhere for you yet I

Only see your soul

Searching for

This in someone

I am
Not finding you

Yet this is
Outrages
Unlikely these are yours
Reaching out to grab it

Even though it is so far
Your eyes are so blue
Even though i thought they'd be green this is
So much better.

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Copyright 2010 Dreamzz
Published on Tuesday, April 6, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Acrostic poem, weeee!
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  • ubiquitoussoul On Tuesday, April 6, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343)By person wrote:

    Nice piece...sure I got a little lost..But I liked it.

  • Dreamzz On Tuesday, April 6, 2010, Dreamzz (19)By person wrote:

    Exactly what i was hoping for i made my words cut short and jumbled hoping to give the feeling of being lost.

  • A former member wrote: i liked this. ~ hdb.

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