Cynic
By Miztaken4beauty
She's such a cynic, but she's still so young,
With October hair and
a silver edged tongue.
She hides in lace and delicate things,
Her back is painted with fairy wings.
She gets it all, the
hate and stares,
Head held high, she doesn't care.
Nothing touches
her heart of ice,
and if it does, it pays the price.
The
rhythm of heavy music soothes the soul,
She'll pretend for a moment
that she's whole.
Forever the girl who incites sin and lust,
the
best friend you just can't help but trust.
She's like the king
with a touch of gold,
Except her touch is always cold.
She tends
to break her favorite toys,
And then she finds another boy.
But what she never lets them know,
Is how it hurts to let them go,
But her eyes are dark and full of hate,
And she knows its far too
late.
To save her.
Comments on "Cynic"
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A former member wrote:
i love this. "Head held high, she doesn't care." sweet as. keep it up =]
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On Sunday, March 28, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Dark and powerful... I enjoyed the rhyme scheme, a nicely done piece... thanks for the ride...
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On Thursday, March 25, 2010, Rowan
(197) wrote:
The darkness has enveloped the soul of thee...very nice write. This was a clever way to tell the story of one so lost, their pain transforms them. Hate is a very strong emotion, you have captured it well.