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Tristeza
By Spiritus_Frumenti
Tristeza ha entrado en nuestras vidas...
It has brought
us cold winds and lonely nights
It has given us painful memories and
tear-filled eyes
It has painted for us the blackest sky
The saddest
we can ever feel inside
It has dragged our souls through the
ice
It has ripped apart our hearts with a knife
It has given
us no hope,
No reason to pray or yearn for a sign
It has
set fire to our minds
It has immersed and drowned our every thought
It has crushed every dream we had
Every moment we cherished
Every
promise we carried
It has made our God look down and cry
It has buried all the ones we loved
It has taken its time to finally
let us die
To let us surrender to the silence
All our lives we
had heard..
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Copyright 2010 Spiritus_Frumenti
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On Wednesday, February 3, 2010, Solace
(1069)
wrote:
Riddle. Last comment. I was going to say this is very direct of you, it involves less imagery than usual. But it is very riddle-like in its format. Tristeza (sadness) I know as a rock band, but the rest of that first line eludes me. A pleasure to immerse in your words again, finding pleasure in melancholy once more.
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A former member wrote:
This IS excellent. Almost like a riddle. I loved it. =)
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A former member wrote:
i do i do i do miss your writes. such a piece of solemnity this is.
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On Sunday, January 31, 2010, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
i missed your comments..i had a 1 year writers block but i may have found my way to some sort of inspiration now..
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On Sunday, January 31, 2010, theXkevorkian
(65) wrote:
Excellent piece ..... Makes me think that some one has recently passed to leave you in such despair .... Thank you for sharing this piece of yourself ....... Write On :)
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