The Last Tear

By scarletara

The Last Tear


In the sky linger stale dark clouds,
Which hang about like evil death shrouds,
The threatening bark of hell's black dogs,
Echoing through the mildewed bogs.
Tombstones composed of cold concrete,
Restraining the corpses hanging with meat.
Dark clouds shroud the air too full of death to breathe.
Sickle sounds searing the night is the bequeath.
Tombstones stand cold and lifeless in guard of the same,
Concrete soldiers with mold, a date, and name.
Gray moss entwined like serpents, saps the life of the tree.
Feeling red grim eyes staring, but not to see.
Touching dampness, dew on dead leaves like tears of those gone before.
Rotting invades sorrow as dust prevails for what is no more...




(Please take notice of the iambic pentameter!)

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Copyright 2010 scarletara
Published on Sunday, January 31, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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(Please take notice of the iambic pentameter!)
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  • haunted On Sunday, September 8, 2013, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    this sounds like a day in the cemetery maybe. a dark poem for sure, which I love. I forget what iambic is but I do know your talent for words is awesome. and you paint a lovely picture with limited colors in this. the blacks and grey colors I see over this dark poem are very colorful indeed. nice poem.

  • A former member wrote: Nice rhyme scheme this is a great poem ^^

  • scarletara On Monday, August 30, 2010, scarletara (58)By person wrote:

    poetry rhythm of Shakespeare. i had to write it for a class. longer i worked on it more thoughts of handing her what she least liked to think about so.. came back with... an A for pentameter but hate ur subject matter! she 1 my fave teachers ever

  • A former member wrote: I took notice! :) I liked it a lot but I'm not sure what an iambic pentameter is...

  • scarletara On Saturday, March 27, 2010, scarletara (58)By person wrote:

    really? no one took notice of the massive effort of writing in iambic pentameter? a massive effort it was...

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