Remains

By Wiccad

I scream
And nothing is heard
I cry
My face remains dry
I cut
And yet remain closed
I fight
But remain still
I feel
Though I remain cold
I love
And remain empty

What purpose has this life
Am I  made of stone
Is this where I belong
So it would seem
My senses dulled
The motivation  gone
Lack of interests
Unforseen events
Turmoil and destruction
Invading my thoughts
Scarring on the inside
Hidden from naked eye
Mourning the loss
Of my human being
Somewhere in the wasteland
That's where she'll be
Alone............
Waiting for me


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Copyright 2010 Wiccad
Published on Friday, January 29, 2010.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Riven Waker On Saturday, January 30, 2010, Riven Waker (323)By person wrote:

    i love the duality of the first stanza - the second entrances with shades of loss and love - brilliant

  • Dilated View On Friday, January 29, 2010, Dilated View (583)By person wrote:

    Wouldn't it be nice if there were spotlights on the things we seek. Or a map to guide us, anything? I can feel and appreciate these emotions of being lost. Nicely done.

  • Malcholm Dark On Friday, January 29, 2010, Malcholm Dark (810)By person wrote:

    A really nice beginning to a fine poem.

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