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Something so wrong... Feels so right...
By Shadow_Kissed5180
I know I want you,
I know it's wrong to hope that I can have you.
How can something so wrong,
Feel so right?
How
can something so vile,
So discusting,
Make me excited...
Even
happy
I want to be hurt by you,
I want to be raped by you,
I want everything to be done by you.
Is this wrong?
Probably.
Because...
You belong,
To someone else,
You say
it's not wrong since there's no feelings,
But that's just you.
What about me?
What about my love for you?
What about
my lust for you?
Is the same thing going to happen again?
Will I end up broken again?
I want you,
I love you,
But,
Anything evolving you,
Is taboo.
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Copyright 2010 Shadow_Kissed5180
Author's Note:
Sorry if this writing doesnt make any sense, I came up with it during English class, so.... yea.... it's probably not my best work.... sorry...Comments on "Something so wrong... Feels so right..."
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On Friday, January 22, 2010, pessum ire animus
(57)
wrote:
i really liked this. can say ive been there, and it sucks and its great, in a completely sadistic kind of way. anyway, great write!
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On Friday, January 22, 2010, maggot death
(60) wrote:
Disagreeing with your note, I think this poem has some structure to it. The only thing that doesn't make sense to me are the last two lines. *flaps wings* Otherwise, good poem:)
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A former member wrote:
i loved the poem. but i gotta say, people who use you with no strings, dont deserve you.
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A former member wrote:
No need to apologize for something you write, it's what you were feeling at the time and that's all any of us are doing...writing what we feel.
You're revealing some serious emotion here and that's not always easy to do.
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