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Disable Me
By Foreverlost28
There is this pain that surges through my body
It seeps through the cracks in my heart
It melts and morphs the tissues of my brain
While stabbing every tip of my being
Im loosing blood
And there are horrific images blocking my sight
This wet, red liquid smells of salt and rust
I can just feel my stomach turning inside out
I am burning from the center of my core
To the outer limits of my exterior
I am losing grip on my this life I try to hold
SOMEONE MAKE IT STOP
Just rip away all of my senses
Tear out my tongue so I no longer can taste the air
Sew my eyes shut so those ill images will go away
Drown my ears out so I cant hear my own screams
Destroy every nerve cell connected to this body of mine
Destroy the pain with it
Destroy my last and final hope
Please, disable me
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© 2009 lttlemissboricua
Comments on "Disable Me"
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A former member wrote:
I once felt like this...more than I can ever stress to you. I know I am an ignorant stranger that does not know you or the life you've lead...but I do know pain...pain that comes from nowhere you can pin point.....and I just need you to know that you CAN talk to me if you'd like. I think I could help you.
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On Thursday, April 9, 2009, Alanarchy
(1168)
wrote:
"frighteningly vivid" Couldn't have said it better myself. Desperate, hopeless, and so frightening. Welcome to dp.
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On Thursday, April 9, 2009, ebonyamore
(100) wrote:
frighteningly vivid imagery and the panic is visceral. I don't know what else to say besides I'm impressed...
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A former member wrote:
i like this a lot... strong images and raw emotion. plus the reader can take what they want from it... your pain is probably different than mine, but we all feel this way about something.
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On Wednesday, April 8, 2009, Sealed Identity
(31) wrote:
I think this is a strong write.. Keep it up! I don't usually rate others works because I feel they are personal and that makes them great, but I like this.
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