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Through the nightglass I.
By palenoble
That silky cobweb nightgown of yours
Reveals more than covers,
My baroness.
Why does it take time
To remove something,
That more isn’t than is?
Listen to them.
Lovers of the night.
For what they yearn.
What music they make.
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© 2009 palenoble
Comments on "Through the nightglass I."
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On Tuesday, March 3, 2009, BrokenAngel
(30)
wrote:
moves slowly, i like it. the seductive torture of love.
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On Tuesday, February 24, 2009, estherbell
(53) wrote:
im commenting on this,as to me its simplicity seems much more honest than the grandiose ones.and the last stanza reminds me of a "song for the lovers".:)
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2009, palenoble
(47) wrote:
Oh, sweet mr. Ashcroft xD
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A former member wrote:
A sultry web, this beckons. Bare and softly woven, though its seductive sway and hum is not to be underestimated. There's a magic in these words. Thank you.
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On Sunday, February 22, 2009, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
Insightful piece, wonderful imagery. The second stanza is outstanding and applies to so very many things in life. Creative, interesting and well crafted. Very much enjoyed this!
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