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Date
By The_Scavenger
Homecoming came and I had no date,
Cause my girl said I she would no longer date,
Torture and torment this women did bring,
To crush my heart with a sling.
To follow it through… a dagger of rust,
From this women I gave my trust.
A women with no heart or soul
To bring this on me twice in a row
The candles go out with the flame of her love
To bring sadness on this day given to me from above.
Alone I go down the trail of shadows…
In search of my missing soul.
A light I see… my dear friend it is with word of the light.
A new date they have found me which they think I will like.
I cave under pressure and agreed with this deed.
The dance I did go with someone I did not know.
7 months ago that was and still today…
I travel with that someone I now know
My love she now is… and forever will be
I pray she too feels this way for my heart is still mending
From the pending pain and I pray
She will not bring rain upon my day
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Copyright 2003 The_Scavenger
Published on Wednesday, May 14, 2003.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Date"
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A former member wrote:
i feel the words dont portray the exact feeling u wanted to get out. good poem still
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518)
wrote:
This was interesting. It had nice flow, and good choice of words. Still for me it is to close to real "story telling". I loved it becouse i care about "you two". But as a poem i think it needs editing.
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A former member wrote:
I like it...its good sept...you rymed date with date...oh well.....great job'!
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On Sunday, June 29, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
nice. I know what it feels like to go places w/ people you don't know, but sometimes it is a good thing (like in your case). I'm really glade you BOTH went because now I have a new friend who helped me probably more then anyone. No Offence Tut Tut. :)
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On Wednesday, May 14, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
I to went under pressur to that date and I am thankful for it everyday. good write.
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On Friday, June 13, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
alright my misspellings ar driving me crazy pressure* and i forgot to add *since*
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