Flatline
By TheUltimateOutlaw
We faded away like the
Pulse—
Of our daydreams;
A passing
Gasp—
For air at sunset;
On the vermilion
Ebb—
Of my nightmares;
I listened for the
Beat—
Of our hearts;
But they were
Still—
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© 2008 TheUltimateOutlaw
Published on Monday, November 10, 2008.
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"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2008, Sketso
(416) wrote:
the abrupt interruptions, exactly the way a slowing heartbeat would slaughter the senses, leaving a hope that just one more... bravo!
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On Monday, November 10, 2008, Fantecstasy
(120) wrote:
You conducted the words wonderfully, even to the harshest places they explored. Really liked the style/theme, creative and well done. *tips hat*
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On Monday, November 10, 2008, heroineyes
(111) wrote:
i loved this...the way it flowed and feelings os silence...truly represents the lack of heartbeat