i tried my best

By bloody LOVEly

I feel the walls close in around me, as the darkness settles in.
The cold that just gets colder, creeps under my skin.
An icy heart shakes what could have been, dropping my dreams into nothingness.
An unsettling hole swirls inside my chest, and where my heart once beat with passion,
a broken promise rests.


(I told you that I'd love you always...
...
I tried my best..........)

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© 2008 bloody LOVEly
Published on Monday, September 8, 2008.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Scarrzz On Tuesday, September 9, 2008, Scarrzz (238)By person wrote:

    when it leaves, it leaves an empty spot inside. Humans are spiritual creatures, and without love inside, we are all like zombies. I hope you & the other find a lasting unity. Scholar

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