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Schrödinger's Kit Kat Club
By AdrianJ
If your time to die has come
and you die - very well!
If your time to die has come
and you don't -
all the better!
Till now I thought
that death befell
the untalented alone
if those with talent too,
must die
surely they make
a better manure?
Had I not known
that I was dead
already
I would have mourned
my loss of life
My one wish
is to live in the capital
of non-action
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© 2008 AdrianJ
Published on Saturday, June 14, 2008.
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On Saturday, November 28, 2009, Riven Waker
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wrote:
this is so clever that i don't know quite how to approach my comment - let me just say that this is a killer piece
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A former member wrote:
I don't believe you....i know you wrote this with all the sincerity you posses and I'm not saying you're lying. I'm saying I don't think you're telling yourself the truth....I don't think you want death.....i think you want acceptance
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On Monday, June 16, 2008, AdrianJ
(34) wrote:
Interesting observation. When I was dying, I was quite torn - death would solve all my problems. Sure, questions unanswered but rendered irrelevant by the finality. But I'm obsessed - I don't want to go until the universe reveals its true nature to me.
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On Saturday, June 14, 2008, Withering petals
(68) wrote:
I loved the last two stanzas - "Had I not known that I was dead already I would have mourned my loss of life My one wish is to live in the capital of non-action " - brilliant. ~Downstream~
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On Saturday, June 14, 2008, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
your prose imparts an artful lull of emotion..........the un-hope of non-belief...........well done.............urban
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