This Hatred Becomes Me

By insanemonroe

this hatred becomes me it steals my soul

it rips my heart out and and makes me cold

twisted is this and so deranged

i feel the pain all i need is a change

a hero, a hopefull, someone to save me

to hold, to listen, not judge or betray the

i pray it will come, i hope that its near

all i want is a life of love without fear

im waiting and wondering when for that day

for my hero to take the past away

all this pain seems so internally insane

your hatred became me you stole my soul

you ripped my heart out and made me cold

*****authors note::::: dont hate on it im not done with it yet******

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© 2008 insanemonroe
Published on Monday, June 2, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Wednesday, June 11, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106)By person wrote:

    For not being done it is still really great. A feeling that is not touched upon by many that often. Your brave in your writing as well. Once again, Very well done. -Heather-

  • Pureheartless On Monday, June 2, 2008, Pureheartless (15)By person wrote:

    nice rhyme... -jake

  • A former member wrote: Not hating on it i really like it.

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