ThirdAuthor

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ThirdAuthor

My sword too filled with thirst,
Within pitch you feel the sting.
Moonlight dance with mirrored blade,
Severed head we share your spring.

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© 2007 ThirdAuthor
Published on Tuesday, October 30, 2007.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • bpathos On Thursday, November 22, 2007, bpathos (77)By person wrote:

    I like it.

  • A former member wrote: very s.k.inful; like the metal edge contrasted with what SHOULD be a human face. . .but just quite isnt. . .. the rust of misuse all over and unseeing eyes, like the devil loved his children so much, he carved out their eyes. ..very sin.ister, solemn, stoic, shushed on purpose; muted protest. where did you come from? im quite intrigued.

  • A former member wrote: with a mouth like that, I could do all sorts of nasty things to you, and it would be our secret ;)

  • Narcissa On Tuesday, October 30, 2007, Narcissa (391)By person wrote:

    Freaky - I hope I don't see you trick or treating tomorrow :)

  • blue On Tuesday, October 30, 2007, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    thats a wicked cool picture!

  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, October 30, 2007, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    ...wicked

  • Niemand On Tuesday, October 30, 2007, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    Ooooh, catchy! I like it!-Airi

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