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Senizas
By Spiritus_Frumenti
It touches me deeply,
These truths,
These thoughts that take me to the end of the world
Where everything burns
Where the ashes of our souls gather by God's feet
It touches me deeply,
These words,
These eyes that discover doomed desires
Places of the heart where faith waits and dies
Places I did not wish I had
It touches me deeply, these moments, this life,
These emotions that make us afraid of living
These emotions that makes us believe,
despite of everything,
All we are ever going to feel is loss...
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© 2007 Spiritus_Frumenti
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On Tuesday, September 5, 2017, worm
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wrote:
you have talent... write more...
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On Tuesday, June 30, 2009, zhade and shanea
(14) wrote:
i agree. loss is all that we fill in the end, however we can fill full if we find that special thing.
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On Tuesday, October 2, 2007, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Ah you never disappoint, or do you - i'm not quite sure which should apply. That brings together the beauty, and then leaves us with the loss - but its not all we're left with, you just make it hard to go back from the conclusion
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On Tuesday, October 2, 2007, Solace
(1069) wrote:
The repetition i think is important, because it is not only the loss that is important, it is that which touches us deeply and so often it is loss...honesty is a wonderful thing...
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A former member wrote:
always a warm embrace when you post; ;a truth that stares directly into the secretes of us, of our lives, of our fears. ..you wear those eyes all too well.
excellent pen~
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