Smoking you away
By BeautifullyRuined
lately i`ve gotten into
the annoying habit
of writing your name down all my cigarettes
in black marker
i always go crosseyed
when the cherry starts licking at the
J
like a familar lover
i cant figure out why i do this
maybe i just want to see your name
burned to ashes
that are so easy to flick away
and be forgotten
the way i wish i could forget you
or maybe i want to remind myself
that your the reason i now smoke two packs a day
and it still isnt enough
its past the
U
and onto the
S
that i believe stands for my stupidity
a fatal disease that only shows
its symptoms when your name
gets brought into the conversations
i continually have with myself
i know i`m making no sense
but do i have to
your the only person i ever wanted to understand me
now i shall forever be a mystery
look at that
T
burn
this is always when the tears start
the last two letters
never fail to remind me
of the time we were
I
N
love
there is no reason behind this
hell maybe i`m hoping for ink poison
Comments on "Smoking you away"
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On Friday, July 27, 2007, asphyxia
(58) wrote:
i love this... it's such a wonderful piece! this is my first time reading your stuff; i had to track you down after your invite on myspace (thank you btw). im glad you added me, too, because apparently i've missed out on some great writing!
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On Wednesday, July 25, 2007, BeautifullyRuined
(94) wrote:
Thank you all for the lovely compliments.
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On Wednesday, July 18, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
havent been around in a bit, i can see what i have been missing... this is... deadly poetry.
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A former member wrote:
what a fabulous imagetic scene; well transcended. . I N love....sharp and clever
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On Tuesday, July 17, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
aw. thats my elana.. creative and beautiful. it came together perfectly.
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On Tuesday, July 17, 2007, Dark Wing
(51) wrote:
Weird how people affect one another, liked the way you put it, hope you feel better, after writing it, ~crow
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On Tuesday, July 17, 2007, jack paper
(126) wrote:
burn baby burn! seems like some kind of voodoo... does it work? maybe? anybody got a smoke? you are very creative
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On Monday, July 16, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
creative and beautiful. Lovely!
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On Monday, July 16, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
This was more than amazing. So creative. And it makes me want to write a certain name on my cigarette. Thanks.
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A former member wrote:
Hahaha. This was so creative. Bravo
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On Monday, July 16, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
This is such a creative way to go about these emotions, and I truly did enjoy each and every syllable. Keep it up. You have my attention.
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On Monday, July 16, 2007, darkdesires
(139) wrote:
I know the pain you feel, I know how crazy lil habbits come back to grasp us again... *hugs* good write... I hope getting it out of your head was a lil gratifing.
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On Monday, July 16, 2007, BeautifullyRuined
(94) wrote:
*Hugs back* alittle but not much...still going crazy:)