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Heartbreak
By Alacer_Cogitatus
ignorance, unlimited.......
yet
wilted roses of black and gold
adorn the precious tombstones of old
death and life are combined as one,
never parting sorrowful ways
life's insignificance, existance
whatfor?
can't think hardly true,
wonderful as the ocean blue
inexpressable, undeniable, insurmountable
can it be?
no
never
it does not exist.
so leave me now, to die in peace
before i change my mind
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Copyright 2005 Alacer_Cogitatus
Published on Thursday, April 30, 2015.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Heartbreak"
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A former member wrote:
Oh my god, that last line was the most painful line I've ever beared to read in any poem ever.. before you change your mind.. wow. I don't even KNOW you, and my heart just broke for you..
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A former member wrote:
this was one of the deepist poems i have read on DP this is great ~~GOTHIC~~
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On Wednesday, February 2, 2005, disc
(36)
wrote:
very sorrowful as these others have said. the last line made for a brutally painful ending. wonderful write.
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A former member wrote:
beautiful display of sorrow.. this was great
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On Tuesday, January 18, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
beautiful and full of sorrow.....great write! ~A
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On Monday, January 17, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
this read soft and full of sorrow in my mind and the last line closed it perfectly, nicely done ~kristy
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