Un Articulo Mortis

By Spiritus_Frumenti

Ascending remissions, definitions of the devils wake
Torn down to reveal, the idea of nothingness
Irreplaceable, voids inconclusive to a mere child
Victim, if not by fury, but in points of retrospections
Visions unsettling in luke-warm waters
Of distant geysers, opening at the bottom,
Sinking to another world
Much darker, unimaginable,
With the stench of rotting angels,
Soaked in the tears of Christ,
And the poor believers, also seething in decay
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Eyes bewildered, inconspicuous, tending to infinite shock
Anxiety running through the veins
The spine, the fine boundaries of the mind
Uncertain of death, fate, reality and illusion
When the conceptions cease to be distinguished
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A new Dawn, or so they’ve heard before,
But not in the closest proximity to this world
To this burning sea of torment
Scorching souls looking up for a savior
Or a sign that someone cares
Not knowing, all along,
He is the one who has sent them there...
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Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2004


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Published on Monday, March 15, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mr King On Thursday, March 10, 2005, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

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  • urbanhumility On Monday, May 10, 2004, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    an articulate managery of beautiful memory or thought...... once again, you have done so well.........urban

  • Solace On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    I'm on the threshold of collapse due to lack of sleeps tender embrace therefore in spite of commenting thoughtfully, just take my pitiful thanks and commendation of your art...

  • flying_fox On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    wow... great words Spiritus. Terrific flow... I loved "Much darker, unimaginable, With the stench of rotting angels," and "Visions unsettling in luke-warm waters". Prettiness and despair all in one. Fox

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