Not So Deep As a Well

By Godot

Not So Deep As a Well

who else can say he held you
in the cherry of your youth
brought silver from the sea
and tasted of vermouth

who else can say he saw you
both naked wrapped in sable
and working out titrations
on the lab room table

who else can say he lost you
to a summer stained with smoke
the seed of so much sadness
as the acorn to the oak

who else can say he loved you
all the years beyond goodbye
with a love that makes no sense
who else, my dear, but I?

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Copyright 2010 Godot
Published on Wednesday, December 29, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Star On Sunday, July 20, 2014, Star (919)By person wrote:

    When I read this I read it like I would a Dr suess story. I thought it was wonderful that way. Beautiful write.

  • Nameless Pariah On Tuesday, May 3, 2011, Nameless Pariah (126)By person wrote:

    Very descriptive this one. Wonderful.

  • lupus tenebrae On Wednesday, December 29, 2010, lupus tenebrae (872)By person wrote:

    Another excellent bout of word smithing, "who else can say he lost you to a summer stained in smoke" well said. Write on. Scholar

  • DarkDruidess On Wednesday, December 29, 2010, DarkDruidess (326)By person wrote:

    yes simply beautiful...*bows*

  • A former member wrote: absolutely beautiful imagery...yet so melancholy. love it! idk what to say because this renders readers speechless.

  • A former member wrote: reminds me of ginsberg. lovely visuals, i do think it is as deep as a well, at least as deep, more lovely though

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