Comments by Poeticexorcism

"Good job on this poem, I like the reference of kids to sugar because when we were Young we are taught to eat a lot of junk food filled with sugar. I am a diabetic and I can tell ya sugar is addicting and one of the most evil things ever made by man. For some people yes it's genetic but I think it's mostly because of the American diet. I like your font choice as well. Keep up the good work."
Posted by Poeticexorcism on "if you ask me, Mother Goose was just another scapegoat" by Devil lyn

"I like the word play, good job. Keep on writing."
Posted by Poeticexorcism on "Full Moon" by Jonas Robinson

"Beautifully put, I will never see shadows the same way."
Posted by Poeticexorcism on "Thanks For All The Nothings." by soul_versing

"Awesome write! I was hanging on every line, wasn't expecting that last line which put everything in perspective. Very refreshing! "
Posted by Poeticexorcism on "Echoes" by DeificLightning

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