Comments by Dei
- "i completely agree. I was in the middle of astronomy class yesterday and as the professor stood lecturing me in the sciences of the universe i couldnt help but this how incredibly poetic it all was. "
Posted by Dei on "Poetry in Motion" by Alchemist
- "This stretched on and out like a slowly occurring epiphany. One gained through years of change. The words folded in and molded themselves. Like watching something grow and gain depth of character right before your eyes. "
Posted by Dei on "In Darkened Times (collab with Robyn and Jadie)" by Alchemist
- "Honestly, this format hurts my eyeballs. But it is interesting. I read a line. And then having the repetition forces the brain rethink what it already knows. I can tell there was real thought put into this. I liked your concept. I don't love the style though. I find it distracting more than anything which is why i felt greatful for the third stanza. It was placed there like an oasis of something more familiar and sane. All in all, I honestly liked it in spite of the eye seizures it caused."
Posted by Dei on "Rebel Without A Cause ~Paradelle~" by Alchemist
- "these stories are exquisitely dense. i feel like im sinking deeper and deep into them instead of merely reading. they truely deserve illustration and binding"
Posted by Dei on "The Gator and the Girl" by Alchemist
- "i can see myself reading this as a children's book. beautiful illustrations and glossy pages. i'm fav-ing this darling."
Posted by Dei on "A Horse Named Cadillac" by Alchemist
- "You and i really need to talk philosophy some time. I believe we share some of the same concepts and theory. "
Posted by Dei on "Wanton Sublunary" by Alchemist
- "I'm a fan of alliteration and it was well used here. I also enjoyed the whimsical metaphor and the way they held an undercurrent of fear and violence. This felt Anthem-like. As if breaking free through embracing the reality that surrounds. Great title. Write on brother!"
Posted by Dei on "Eclectic in an Electric Age" by Alchemist
