Comments by Dei
- "just came back to peek in on you. Its been too long sir. Much too long"
Posted by Dei on "my name" by edenscancer
- "i wanted to come visit this again. it still crushes me. So sexy, and intense. i miss you! youve been gone too long!"
Posted by Dei on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "i was going through my bookmarks and i forgot how brilliant this was. After reading it a hundred times over the years since you wrote it.. it still makes me sick with wanting. And the ending rips my breath away and leaves me aching for a ciggarette"
Posted by Dei on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "Oh EDEN! its bee ever so long. This was beautifully written. Kudos. "
Posted by Dei on "Lover" by edenscancer
- "OH my oh my. . .This was lovely darling. I do hope you put this one to music as well. Poems were designed to be spoken, to be heard not just read. You capture that so well. "
Posted by Dei on "My last poem" by edenscancer
- "i oculd barely get through this. It struck me light a bolt of lightening. I suppose that makes you zues. "
Posted by Dei on "dirty little slut" by edenscancer
- "-hugs Eden- wow. this was powerful. It had no specific style it came off as a rambling in a diary. questioning yourself and life and why we innocense. "
Posted by Dei on "5am" by edenscancer
- "A few small grammer/spelling mishaps. But other than that it flowed nicely and i liked the structure in general. The write itself was passionate and well expressed. Good job. -Natelle"
Posted by Dei on "My voice" by edenscancer
