Comments by bluegypsea
- "I love the imagery and personification used here... however, I would edit the line that reads in part "...the death of a thousand dying stars". This sounds redundant. Otherwise, the poem seems to flow pretty well."
Posted by bluegypsea on "Dying Stars and Broken Universes" by LovelyUndead
- "Evokes an image of "beautiful angst". I really enjoyed reading this... and especially the line "I'll wrap myself in a cocoon of crystallized tears". Brilliant!"
Posted by bluegypsea on "Bitter Caterpillar" by DuchessofDoom
- "Great form of poetry -- very interesting to read. The quality of the poem is, to me, also really great! However, what is grey #87? Just curious."
Posted by bluegypsea on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "This is wonderful! I love the image that this creates in the mind.... it really speaks to my imagination. I really like the line that reads, in part, "A wracking so sullen..."! Excellent word crafting. :)"
Posted by bluegypsea on "The Sound of Swarms" by Brandon
