Melancholia
By bluegypsea
clouds hunger for the eager rain
while weeping with vivid fear,
the passionate storm sweeps over gloom
and thirsts for crushing pain;
causing a gentle shame
and imperfect guilt,
meddling thunder assumes remorse
briskly appointing lackluster blame;
welcoming profound regret
the rolling clouds create a striking fear,
and feed from untold pain
sadness overshadows the impending threat;
painting blacks and greys and woe
make for shadows of approaching guilt,
conscience begs reprieve from misery
fabricating the peacefulness of rain so slow;
a shock of embellished fear
becomes a vessel for shame,
a hardened plea for loss of ill repute
and all that you hold dear;
thunder strikes terror
into the heart of guilt,
a cold, sticky rain
inflicts blinding pain without error;
an unknown degree of pain
will cut the lines of shame,
barren soil accepts the torrents
but shuns the crimson stain;
festering in the mask of guilt
and shifting the sphere of unwitting horror
into a brainwashing of fear
over this slippery rose left to wilt;
making for a shining admission of anguish
an ostracized shame
begins to recognize the weary gloom
and cause the spirit to languish;
the gentle tides of fear cascade into shame
a morbid pain gives way to gloom,
a solid congruence of guilt and pallid rain
begin to melt into one and the same.
Comments on "Melancholia"
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On Saturday, February 3, 2018, TheJestyrIsHere
(7) wrote:
This is a truly beautiful piece of work. The words you weave throughout this poem is remarkable and the imagery is great. Absolutely fantastic!
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On Sunday, August 21, 2016, Anarchist
(12) wrote:
Beautiful. Creative. Visions. You craft poetry into visions with your impeccable use of words. Thanks for sharing.
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On Sunday, August 21, 2016, bluegypsea
(20) wrote:
Thank you so much! :)
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On Tuesday, August 2, 2016, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
I have enjoyed reading your work this evening, you make very good use of imagery. Ciao, T/S
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On Tuesday, August 2, 2016, bluegypsea
(20) wrote:
Thank you for your kind words!