Comments by BeautifulCalamity
- ""What would you say if my heart began to crumble?", weightless/dust/bleached.. random strong things that came to mind, this write is the best of yours I've read so far.. great write."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "My Confession" by Deadly Embrace
- "the second stanza.. was wonderful. the pain and still a flicker of hope absolutely crowned this write. "For I looked with the depths,
Of such hope-filled eyes,
To feed me nothing more..
Than fairytale lies"-amazing line.. "
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "All That Could Have Been.." by Deadly Embrace
- "wow, this was truly beautiful."Like a withering rose,
Brushing against the wind.
And the tears that fall,
From such elegance", some amazing lines in this. I must read more of your stuff now, I'm drawn in. great work :) "
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Redefined Beauty" by Deadly Embrace
