Comments by GirlintheBox
- "hey, sounds like what i was telling my boyfriend tonight! (lol) can i borrow this? i promise ill give you credit for writing it ;) *krystal*"
Posted by GirlintheBox on "Touch Me" by Soulseeker
- "good poem...6th stanza (I am ready to fight back), doesnt flow like the rest of the poem...would u consider taking out "is" in the 3rd line? and "they say" in the 4th? other than that..wow *krystal*"
Posted by GirlintheBox on "Pyre" by Graveyard_Desciple
- "ive only been a member for one day, but ive managed to read most of your poems. you are incredibly gifted! you are the reason ive searched the web so long and hard to find good poetry...keep it up, and offer me constructive critisism anytime!"
Posted by GirlintheBox on "Dreamer" by cre
