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blood oranges
By Kfritz
I cut blood oranges
Ontop of a paper plate
Its juice stained my fingers
And its pulp stuck on my face
As I contiue to wipe the tears away
Leaving a sticky streak of red
Under my eyes
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Copyright 2004 Kfritz
Published on Wednesday, August 4, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
The images created certainly fit this poem well. Short. Sweet. Deadly. ~Shane~
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On Friday, August 6, 2004, girlafraid
(480)
wrote:
i like this..i agree that it is creepy but cool all the same
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
very nice piece--haunting
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Had a surreal taste to it when read.
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
short but triippy write.. i like this poem* 669 *
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx
(64) wrote:
i think i pulled something a bit different from this because when i was 13 and got told to stop self harming, they made me slice fruit with a razorblade instead. so yeah this creeped me out.
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx
(64) wrote:
great write though. i especially love the last two lines.
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
morbid and different...but I think I might have missed the meaning...
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Kfritz
(12) wrote:
Its just of kind of fruit theres no hidden meaning...atleast not on my end
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, GirlintheBox
(41) wrote:
kinda creepy...i like ;)
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