Comments by Ravenblade
- "I have to admit, I hate making decisions. I also, know I hate sharing, and would not be able to live with someone who has torched me in the past. I always believe in moving forward, even though I may step in the wrong direction often, it just makes more sense. Poetically speaking, this was fun to read. It's definitely relatable on many levels....not sure if relatable is a real word"
Posted by Ravenblade on "Decision point" by BetaWolfinVA
- "I think you allow yourself to be hurt...Raven sounds young and gameful, and like she just likes having options....burning bridges and then rebuilding them before things fall apart. I just think that things are not what they seem when you're looking as well...as for this, it was well developed, simple, and tells exactly what it needs to, and doesn't feel overly structured, but carries the appearance."
Posted by Ravenblade on "I'm getting a Mite Spin Dizzy" by BetaWolfinVA
- "This sounds like a familiar story...I don't dare indulge as much as you...but it looks like as tortured as you are, you're getting to where you need to be, inching there slowly, but like Aesop said, slow and steady wins the race."
Posted by Ravenblade on "Sound Track of My Life (HTML)" by BetaWolfinVA
- "I think I have a hard time reading much of your poetry because it takes me back to battles I have had to fight one way or another, and times when I was not of a right mind to make those battles. Looks like you are taking the same path I did...only time will tell sir. This was painstaking to read though it was not my story, it shed light on a time it would have pertained."
Posted by Ravenblade on "So i over share" by BetaWolfinVA
- "Cameron, something about your style of writing that reminds me of the Dead Poets Society movie. It feels almost classical. Sorry for your torment...I've been through similar, but I don't fathom I was remotely as connected as you were to your 'Raven'"
Posted by Ravenblade on "Time Tortures me" by BetaWolfinVA
- "Powerful work...I felt much pain and anguish in the path to reform. Hard not to get caught up in my own life as I read through it..it took a few extra passes to really appreciate because it stirred up some emotions I had buried some time ago. Thank you for sharing"
Posted by Ravenblade on "Truth and Consequences" by BetaWolfinVA
