FareWell to one with Red-Raven Hair
By BetaWolfinVA
you ask me if i still hurt
these weeks after the end
and yet
i was expecting the
blow a long time now
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I knew from
me you would go,
into anothers arms
yet i hoped time would dance
me true
and not again in its dervish aire
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soon passion
and time may meet
in the clanginging of bells,
but far from each
other we will be,
for this times reality,
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Copyright Wednesday, 13 October 1999 HHMCameron
Author's Note:
Weeks after Raven broke it off with me ending the Three Year distance Relationship. the original is somewhere on alt.arts.poetry.comments. I do not believe that i ever saw her true hair color, she had Auburn hair that was almost always dyed black.Comments on "FareWell to one with Red-Raven Hair"
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On Saturday, February 9, 2013, Star
(920) wrote:
just beautiful (:
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On Saturday, February 9, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
glad that you liked it :)
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On Wednesday, January 30, 2013, Ravenblade
(313) wrote:
Short, simple, and sweet...often I think the things written in fewer words are better suited...
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On Saturday, February 2, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
i tend to write short or structured... i definately am better at short than prose...