FareWell to one with Red-Raven Hair

By BetaWolfinVA

you ask me if i still hurt
these weeks after the end
and yet i was expecting the
blow a long time now
-
I knew from me you would go,
into anothers arms
yet i hoped time would dance me true
and not again in its dervish aire
-
soon passion and time may meet
in the clanginging of bells,
but far from each other we will be,
for this times reality,

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Copyright Wednesday, 13 October 1999 HHMCameron
Published on Monday, March 11, 2013.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Weeks after Raven broke it off with me ending the Three Year distance Relationship. the original is somewhere on alt.arts.poetry.comments. I do not believe that i ever saw her true hair color, she had Auburn hair that was almost always dyed black.
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  • Star On Saturday, February 9, 2013, Star (920)By person wrote:

    just beautiful (:

  • BetaWolfinVA On Saturday, February 9, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    glad that you liked it :) Scholar

  • Ravenblade On Wednesday, January 30, 2013, Ravenblade (313)By person wrote:

    Short, simple, and sweet...often I think the things written in fewer words are better suited...

  • BetaWolfinVA On Saturday, February 2, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    i tend to write short or structured... i definately am better at short than prose... Scholar

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