Comments by NikesRain

  • "should i be selfish and scream and rant how unfair it is... if i could get past the trembling in my hands and the way the tears choke my words off i would... yeah... i would be that selfish because i'd really rather the nastiness go and you stay"
    Posted by NikesRain on "digging a hole" by denver nitze
  • "a different feel from you... not sure the music to go with this but i know you'd do a great job with that voice of yours... a lot of mind pricking and thought churning to be had in this.... "
    Posted by NikesRain on "under remote control" by denver nitze
  • "damn it now i'll have that damn thing running through my head all day at work tomorrow... thanks sharon :P j/k as for the write the sadness and melancholy feels like repeated pinpricks to the heart.. the end though for some reason just seemed to be a hit of strength... might just be my mind twisting the way it does... well done "
    Posted by NikesRain on "th.rough." by denver nitze
  • "my mind and heart tumbled and sighed over the visuals you created with this and the emotions cut off my voice... thank gods i can type at least... great work"
    Posted by NikesRain on "choking on sand" by denver nitze
  • "i feel for you hun, i don't know what was worse when i had something like it for 2 weeks, the horrible antibiotics that didn't seem to do a hell of a lot or the constant balloon head... hope you feel better soon"
    Posted by NikesRain on "!!blow me!!" by denver nitze
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