Comments by Jonas
- "and GOD! i feel what you're writing about. i'm scared of women, of marriage... people suck and will hurt you if it is only slightly advantageous to them. how can i trust someone like that how can i trust someone with my heart? fuck. "
Posted by Jonas on "Damn My Parents" by liquid_emotion
- "hmmm... it would be true that this is not your most eloquent piece, however, you still have a razor sharp idea that remains concise thru-out the poem. "
Posted by Jonas on "Damn My Parents" by liquid_emotion
- "oh my fucking god! (i have a fucking god?... no wonder not much attention is paid the earth or my woes... he's obviuosly got better things... anyway) "
Posted by Jonas on "unadulterated blankness" by liquid_emotion
- "a relaxed sigh as i think about my mother who is a delicious flavour of sanity. (the woodchimes imagery, perfect, playing in my head, you know)"
Posted by Jonas on "Momma" by liquid_emotion
- "ahhh! i heave a sigh of relief! i'm stressed, but the last two poems i've read convey this tropical romance that gives me such peace! a sigh of relief again!"
Posted by Jonas on "Nightly Shower" by liquid_emotion
- "none of us here are destined for greatness, unless that be in the guise of rock-stardom. poetry... has no academic standing. sucks huh?"
Posted by Jonas on "Handmade Thoughts" by liquid_emotion
- "whenever i try to write to describe this stuggle it always comes out as nothing but a blathering couple of wank words. i really like how you've described this eternal frustration and further i like how you've explained why our work is not futility. "
Posted by Jonas on "Handmade Thoughts" by liquid_emotion
- "i love how in your writing you just kinda whack the reader in the face when they get to the end with some simple and eloquent insight. you gots game hehe :-)"
Posted by Jonas on "Because the World Knew" by liquid_emotion
- "hmmmmm... you are quite insightful. and i likes it. this is a great poem and puts into words a feeling and impression that i've had to use much too many words to describe in the past. wonderful"
Posted by Jonas on "Views of the Lesser Skilled" by liquid_emotion
- "i love this. i'll be (anywhere) and then the memory or the feeling of something not quite entirely containable in my head will jump out of the depths of my sub-head :-) and bite me on the brain stem. chills."
Posted by Jonas on "Years Later" by liquid_emotion
