Comments by soul_versing
- "A Painstakingly sweet sentiment tied into one, you had me stuck in thought for a brief moment. I particularly liked how you transitioned from a longing tone into a present. A neat read, I dig. -Bows"
Posted by soul_versing on "Little bird " by beamish
- "I always wanted to travel through space, sense I could remember, at age 4. I still have dreams and high hopes of one day accomplishing that goal. But deep down inside, I know that it's a lost cause. .sighs. Thank you for the memory. -Bows "
Posted by soul_versing on "Float away " by beamish
- "Solid imagery. I noticed a wee typo that can easily be fixed, "reawakening (that's is) almost here." ...I really like this piece because I can tell that you write from the heart. And that my friend, is why you've became my new found favorite poet. -Write on "
Posted by soul_versing on "My awakening" by beamish
- "I'm a firm believer that revealing pieces of oneself in short stanza reveals far more than realized. Great piece that you have here. -Bows"
Posted by soul_versing on "Drug my soul" by beamish
- "Astonishing read as each line signifies a greater passion lingering in the smoldering depths below. Your words have a powerful impact, an assured poetic awakening... Indeed. -Bows "
Posted by soul_versing on "Venomous words " by beamish
- ""If I took my eyes could I not cry for a time" one of the many great lines displayed in this displaced emotional lock. Brilliant and raw, yet full of life. -Bows
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Posted by soul_versing on "Crucified " by beamish
- "Questioning can stand as a strong factor when trying to decide what it is that needs to be resolved. I like this piece because it holds true to that meaning. Hello there poet and welcome to the valley. -Write on"
Posted by soul_versing on "Whisper" by beamish
