Float away

By beamish

I think I would like to be lost in space. 

Just to float away in a suit of silver. 

Look at the star maybe visit Mars. 

Swim the rings of Saturn  before going to the moon for a bit of cheese. 

Just think how glorious those days would be. 

The spaceman on a odyssey.  

You could face off with Marvin and do what buggies was unable get done.  

Then float back off after you won. 

I can't think of a better way to spend my nights and the never ending day. 

Floating where only the gods are supposed to play. 

Then sleep on the sun when your day is done. 

But it's just a dream not meant for me cause my feet are made of lead and I'm stuck here till I'm dead.

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Copyright 2016 beamish
Published on Thursday, March 17, 2016.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Domenta On Saturday, August 26, 2017, Domenta (9)By person wrote:

    i love the wallace and gromit reference of the moon being made out of cheese and i love the wonder of this there has been many times where i just wanted to lay out under the stars and be taken away by a shooting star https://i.ytimg.com/vi/L2lfp6PRyJ0/maxresdefault.jpg

  • soul_versing On Saturday, March 19, 2016, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    I always wanted to travel through space, sense I could remember, at age 4. I still have dreams and high hopes of one day accomplishing that goal. But deep down inside, I know that it's a lost cause. .sighs. Thank you for the memory. -Bows Scholar

  • beamish On Saturday, March 19, 2016, beamish (134)By person wrote:

    So have I. It has to be spectacular out there

  • A former member wrote: A fantasy often shared by those with the aesthetic touch to their natures. You express the ultimate escapism and it is easily understood and shared by most. Well composed with really good word selections forming a delightful read.

  • beamish On Saturday, March 19, 2016, beamish (134)By person wrote:

    Thank you for your comments. I really appreciate them

  • ColorMeToxic On Thursday, March 17, 2016, ColorMeToxic (238)By person wrote:

    I particularly loved the last line of this piece. Great write. Scholar

  • beamish On Saturday, March 19, 2016, beamish (134)By person wrote:

    I think a lot of us relate to the last line. Thanks

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