Comments by cre
- "OOo. I love the last lines of the last two stanzas . . that last stanza is actually just very very cool . . and the images makes it all so vivid. Well done . ."
Posted by cre on "*~Disintegration In Purple Dreams~*" by Zhee
- "My god . . this is incredible. I don't feel as though I merely "read" this . . I feel that it reached out from this page and insinuated itself into my mind. The rhyme and flow is gorgeous, and the subject matter is perfect . . a vivid masterpiece . . sha"
Posted by cre on "Where Nightmares Collide" by Stormcomin
- "Sixie . . I don't know how you keep tearing your heart out and putting it into poetic form . . it's intense, how real your words are. Your words are yours still . . but we all want to touch them and be close to something so incredible. "
Posted by cre on "murder lead with ink" by Six-Out
- "I love "nothing is cliche when you're dead" and "it's always tomorrow. until tomorrow is yesterday" . . once again, very quotable and so vividly written. Well done. I love the word acrid . . "
Posted by cre on "acrid" by Six-Out
- "This is very sad . . it is so filled with despair and openly pained. So many fabulous lines, and worded the way that only our Sixie can do it. I especially love the last stanza, but the entire thing is well-written and just aching with the pain you must "
Posted by cre on "a silent symphony in C major" by Six-Out
- "Ooh. This IS sad . . and yes it's noble . . but in the end you MUST take care of yourself, and if people hurt you, you have to live a different life without them. Don't let them hurt you time and time again. Still, very beautifully written, and clearly p"
Posted by cre on "I Was Hurt Today" by Angst Queen
- "so incredible . . I can never, ever tire of reading you. You own rhyme."
Posted by cre on "Ana" by Godot
- "I really enjoy reading you. Again, great job on the rhyme scheme and what a story you tell. Well done."
Posted by cre on "Hell's Concern" by Stormcomin
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