Comments by unusual_blood
- "anyway i think this one is supposed to be read slowly. really take it in. once this is done you feel the superioty stabbing this poem. Although i was a bit confused at first i can now see the frusteration"
Posted by unusual_blood on "i reek of inferiority" by manunkind
- "please it's impossible that someone here hasn't had a low selfesteem. i for one used to be anorexic. that's beside the point. i can't believe i thought this of mrs.buttler! ugh such a moron. i for one"
Posted by unusual_blood on "i reek of inferiority" by manunkind
- "shit, i meant the ice queen. sry i'm polluting your comment area with so many comments. i just can't believe how much talent you've got. first time i read em' i didn't really take the time to see. now i have. SUPERB work"
Posted by unusual_blood on "pink nail polish" by manunkind
- "i re-read this poem, and i loved the symbols here of the colors, the little girl, the ice cream, and finally the puddle. ironic how we always want to be what we are not. i disagree, i think the repitition worked well"
Posted by unusual_blood on "pink nail polish" by manunkind
- "wow. this is .. you really took the words out of my mouth in this one. I'm full of shame for not being able to provide the right eulogy that this poem deserves. This one really touched me. deep down inside"
Posted by unusual_blood on "break the mirror" by manunkind
- ""like diamonds my bones" liked how you worded this one. (sentence and poem) The 4th stanza is insanly ingeniously brillant. (if THAT'S even possible!) I NEVER want to be found in my above either"
Posted by unusual_blood on "my above" by manunkind
- "shit, running outta space. it's a good thing, becasue these things should be written like that, and should be heard. What you write is soo true. ok, i'll stop taking up your space ;) Loved this one"
Posted by unusual_blood on "we, the artists" by manunkind
- "you can write about a subject, about anything that happens. I know this poem isn't entirely about that fight, but .. yuo've got this amazing way of writing portraying such deep feelings. Which is a"
Posted by unusual_blood on "we, the artists" by manunkind
- "yes, we all are outsiders, and no matter how hard we fight, we will always be "new". thats the beauty here .. we all fit in here better than anywhere else. our dearest website. i just realized how well "
Posted by unusual_blood on "we, the artists" by manunkind
- "Love how you wrapped this one up. You took the words right out of my mouth, right out of my soul, right out of my heart. So ironic how in the end, in "exchange for the pain" we end up "decorating xmas trees" ..."
Posted by unusual_blood on "in exchange" by manunkind
- "Ali this poem is FUCKING AWSEOME! I really like the repition, and .. it's just .. it's really really good. I really do believe that you are a TRUE poet. really great stuff here, and just when I thought"
Posted by unusual_blood on "the conquerers" by manunkind
- "awww ali babe don't worry. we still got our years to come. and eachother to critique and shit ;) shit man, look at all these comments, IT'S RAINING COMMENTS! "
Posted by unusual_blood on "red letters say: WHORE" by manunkind
- "WOW awseome job. its delusional saint by the way, i finally figured out the way this thing works! This poem ... i can see the colours. "Until it is time to wake up to the ugly blacks and browns and grays" Great line"
Posted by unusual_blood on "pink nail polish" by manunkind
