Comments by metaphormachine

"Yes, I have! Since I know you so much more ... ;)"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Bodily functions " by Stephanie Sideways

"Very beautiful & romantic ... a great Valentine's Day poem! I want to be hit by the arrows ... tender & refreshing ... textured fabric love ... a sweet "love struck" ... :)"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Cupids Arrows " by Stephanie Sideways

"Hm, dearest Stephanie, rhyme you can definitely. The sense I understand at least for now not quite ... my English is unfortunately only merit of a "hun" ... I like the line "protecting kin from any Sin" because it is consistent within itself. And if I may venture a guess is it the main descriptive proposition of the poem?! When it comes to the protection of the family and the clan? And some problems within the kin? I'm sorry that I can not offer any meaningful interpretation ... maybe there is such a still ... later. But as always, beautifully written! Keep it up! :)"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Longing a banished word" by Stephanie Sideways

"Mrs. Sideways, a conventional love poem, but nicely worded. Flowing lines and very nice metaphors of love, especially the term of the tidal fits wonderfully. I like the 3rd stanza, I enjoy that ... and the first 3 lines of the 4th, especially "I'm craving for the mainland / But an island's what I get." (ingenious!) ... which I find very successful. Last but not least you have found a great connection ... and an ending. Beautiful! :)"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Driftwood" by Stephanie Sideways

"You can best describe what make certain obsessions ... Again, I like your rhymes & also the rhythm of your rhymes. Beautifully written, Lady Passion! :)"
Posted by metaphormachine on "My Sweet Obsession" by Stephanie Sideways