Comments by stormtalk

  • "yeah, now that i know what this is about, parts make much more sense... and the whole is all the more brilliant... well done, as usual."
    Posted by stormtalk on "thirteen teeth" by swing_the_hammer
  • "The eerie melody of this is beautiful... your rhythm commands my attention while your images subject it to a shiveringly pleasurable trip down a river at midnight... the "dark starling" stanza was particularly masterful. Feed me more!"
    Posted by stormtalk on "god lives underwater" by swing_the_hammer
  • "By the way, your name reminds me of the saying "to someone with a hammer, everything looks like a nail." Also, this is my 1000th comment. I guess I'm an official DP slut now!"
    Posted by stormtalk on "resolve" by swing_the_hammer
  • "The swirling sense of ennui and deja vu-like confusion I see here are tastefully and skillfully conveyed, and the last line just made me want to read it again. I think I have a fetish for last lines. Hah. Great work, hammer."
    Posted by stormtalk on "resolve" by swing_the_hammer
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