Comments by FadedBlues
- "...we stop writing, & how it hurts! but we are visited again by that angel, & we write. we write, & again how it hurts!..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Diamond Belly" by nur hidayah
- "...it's interesting & proper that you treat like a human presence, describing the passing of a beloved family member. I hope you visit here occasionally..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "The Shrieking Colours" by nur hidayah
- "Nur...'thundersongs': I used the same idea in 'the sky sings thunder' recently...the same poetic thought falling into the minds of different writers at different times & popping like a tiny firecracker..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
- "Nur (Beauty), this is enchanting...
'the slut, A', & also "The Scarlett
Letter", the leader of the alphabet, yet
so maligned..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "tip" by nur hidayah
- "Nur...the title & 'halo unfastening'
create the vision of a falling angel,
whom we hope will remain 'frozen in
a leap' rather than meeting the ground..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "the skydiver" by nur hidayah
