Comments by cadymae
- "It had been an interesting year. Most of my works have been composed in my head but then not captured. I have promised myself to write them down more. Thank you for the feedback. You always offer lovely comments."
Posted by cadymae on "Swallowing the sword" by cadymae
- "You guys are lovely with your feedback and close readings! Thank you to all three of you. I was picturing the roommate of my mother's during a rehab stint in March. the lady had the most wonderful skin and eyes and smile. She seemed like someone who'd have hosted a tea party for her daughter, circa 1950"
Posted by cadymae on "Blooming on the decline" by cadymae
- "Y'all are sweet. Thank you for the kind words. I live in FLA. No winter here. Was looking at a very odd magnet I was handed at a festival of a wide-eyed bird. It looks like it just listened to the entire catalog of Floyd and sat down to think about it. So I wrote this. :)"
Posted by cadymae on "The Last Finch" by cadymae
- "I was worried this would be misinterpreted to mean physical abuse. I forgot this is DarkPoetry and y'all get it! Love is dark too. And my goodness Love Bruises...."
Posted by cadymae on "Indented" by cadymae
- "sigh. Your close reading and erudite references always make me smile. I'm impressed you remembered to come back, as well. Thank you... "
Posted by cadymae on "Up-skirting a noun" by cadymae
- "@Dybbuk: My firearms instructor taught us to keep an unloaded pump shotgun in the house. Just the sound of the action makes intruders pause."
Posted by cadymae on "Get off my lawn" by cadymae
- "LOL at your comment. On the other side of town I'm considered a "youth." The part of town where I can afford a mortgage however... I'm OLD."
Posted by cadymae on "Get off my lawn" by cadymae
- "Tnx for always reading and offering feedback. It is fun hearing how my writings are interpreted."
Posted by cadymae on "A whisky rinse" by cadymae
- "Was staring at my wrecked Kawasaki in the po-po lot... Broken nose n stitched up cheek n lip."
Posted by cadymae on "Ode to Speed" by cadymae
- "Thanks for all the kind words, my fellow poets. :) I love posting stuff here. I know I'll get good feedback on my poems. I learn something every time I post one."
Posted by cadymae on "The ants go marching" by cadymae
- "Thanks for the edit, Teach. Nice catch. Which means you read that pretty damn closely. Which is startling to me. I forget I have readers like you reading when I post what I write in my notebooks. Many tnx for reading and the feedback. Enjoy the day."
Posted by cadymae on "Observation No. 1" by cadymae
- "You've made me rethink using the word suckle in any other context except maternally though. Those of us who are kid-free by choice don't automatically think of that but we are the minority so.... "
Posted by cadymae on "Newborn and trembling" by cadymae
- "I'm always fascinated by what readers get from poems I write. I like it when they see things in there I wasn't thinking of, but I LOVE it when folks get it! You can intimate things in between the words sometimes that a reader can sense. It's awesome how multi-edged language is! "
Posted by cadymae on "Newborn and trembling" by cadymae
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