Comments by haunted
- "your words are clever and well placed. this poems painting is full of colors to be seen and felt. excellent write and your imagination is top notch. very well done."
Posted by haunted on "~Tapestry~" by infinitebeing
- "this is just to awesome to put into words. this is a very good piece that you crafted. im loving it, just awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Mindsweeper" by infinitebeing
- "oh man, a violated and innocent robbed child has got to be the fucking worse thing ever. people are sick, people are capable of horrible things, terrible fucking things. I don't understand...a child, come on. he should be hanged and castrated then raped in his ass while he cant fight back. there will never be justice for such an act. its sad and even sadder that this even took place. this is heart wrenching and my best goes to you. thanks for sharing sweety."
Posted by haunted on "Faded Memories" by infinitebeing
- "this is so awesome, to hear you let go of a life that seemed like maybe it was fun and friends and addiction. its a lifestyle. and it sounds like you are done. and that's an excellent achievement. I hope you never look back with that desire and fire to use. just keep walking, in fact run....run with your dreams. your young and beautiful, you deserve the best, and only you can change that. I wish you luck on your road to recovery. or should I say, welcome to your new life! your awesome and inspiring. great poem!"
Posted by haunted on "-My Mistakes-" by infinitebeing
- "yes I agree, the spoon houses many monsters. ive seen friends struggle with that addiction and because of that I will never fuck with heroin or any thing else that's labeled heaven in a syringe. I see what it does, I wish you could of saw that, but we walk other paths and because of these paths we become who we are. and fuck people that judge our past, its people like that, that make us feel like we'll never make it out. but its all up to us to make that choice, that huge fucking decision to give it up. its hard as hell, and I hope your strength stays strong, life is much better with out the dope, as im sure you know. i hope this didn't sound like a lecture, but then again, take it how you want, cause you know whats up miss infinite. and I care. awesome poem."
Posted by haunted on "MY MONSTER" by infinitebeing
- "this is really uplifting, that you can let your guard down for someone special. I hope that they don't let you down. your very pretty and you have a beautiful gift and you deserve the best. I hope your tears never feel like your to blame, ever. "
Posted by haunted on "Friendship" by infinitebeing
- "awe, this is empowering, to take what was yours to begin with. kind of like giving your heart to be cradled and loved. but only to have your precious heart in the hands of someone who has the wrong idea on what love is. this ones a little sad. *hugs to you*"
Posted by haunted on "**Beaten Black**" by infinitebeing
- "if im reading correctly your referring to the truly great poems that are unworthy for any ones eyes because its to personal to share. ive wrote a few poems like that. just to see what my true feelings look like on paper. just to get it out. its very therapeutic because were getting that honesty, at times the brutal honesty that just cant be shared. your just awesome, that's all I can say."
Posted by haunted on "PEN TO PAPER" by infinitebeing
- "well you've crawled inside my mind, but far from being unpleasant. lol...beautiful words come from pain, collecting thoughts of after the matter, great poems like yours are wrought. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "~LOCKED AWAY~" by infinitebeing
- "I can so relate, we wish we were dead, but may as well be when we seem to be invisible to others. ive often been tempted to ask if im still alive and not a left over spirit unaware of his death. on the other hand its an escape from those that would confirm were alive. to truly be alone is needed when we cant really function in a world that just passes us by. its a depressing place to be, and its sad that I do this at times. I could go on forever but ill spare you. lol...awesome poem and so relatable. "
Posted by haunted on "-cOnFiNeD-" by infinitebeing
- "I can relate to this well, its a very valuable tool to use to go into a deep state of relaxation. some and few are able to project on an astral plane. I studied and practiced this regularly but with no solid results. escaping into other dimensions sounds so incredible to me. but this is my escape...poetry just like yours. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Awakening" by infinitebeing
- "damn girl, you can fucking write! im in awe of your poetry. its really straight up in this poem. im just very excited for you, because I know when you write your like, this shit is bomb. I would to! fucking awesome, damn."
Posted by haunted on "!FAST LIFE ANTHEM!" by infinitebeing
- "some complain theres not enough sex in their violence. I guess that's the difference in abuse, some crave it some are deserving and welcome the abuse. *raises hand* even then its tragic, theres usually sexual abuse already present. I think I may have led astray, lol...but yeah a great poem infinite, much enjoyed. please excuse my ramblings."
Posted by haunted on "~INTENTION~" by infinitebeing
- "awesome, at first I thought this sounded like really bad anxiety but then the mood changes and becomes darker, and that's a beautiful thing. nice!!"
Posted by haunted on "**DROWNING**" by infinitebeing
- "this is amazing, your a great poet and I hope you don't get tired of me saying so. really nice, loved it."
Posted by haunted on "EULOGIES" by infinitebeing
- "oh my god, I cant say enough. this is really beautiful...*heart skips beat* this gives me an erection, sorry but I love it that much. your an excellent poet, and I wish I could be those delicious words you layed down. awesome pen dear."
Posted by haunted on "DEATH SMILED :)" by infinitebeing
- "hell yeah, this is awesome, you got lots of talent in that pen of yours. I love your words, I love how you express yourself, your very good at that, that's critical for a poet. this is great poetry, you really did a great job on this one. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "-RAZORS EDGE-" by infinitebeing
- "this is really a great poem and I can relate to life on the streets as ive walked many miles on them. I love this poem, its great a great ryhtym and super smooth rhyme to it. excellent pen!"
Posted by haunted on "LIFE ON THE STREETS" by infinitebeing
