DROWNING

By infinitebeing

Sinking slowly
Drowning me
Gasping for air
Grasping for hope
Heavy chains
Weighing me down
Straight to the bottom
Without a sound....

                                     ALL YOU FAT
                                       CHATTERING FACES
                                          EATING ME
                                             BEATING ME
                                                 HELPING ME DROWN.

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Published on Thursday, December 12, 2013. Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"

Comments on "DROWNING"

On Saturday, December 14, 2013, infinitebeing (80) wrote:

thank u for the slight smile i recieved from reading ur comment... i needed that :)
On Saturday, December 14, 2013, haunted (849) wrote:

awesome, at first I thought this sounded like really bad anxiety but then the mood changes and becomes darker, and that's a beautiful thing. nice!!
On Friday, December 13, 2013, infinitebeing (80) wrote:

IT FEELS GOOD TO KNOW MY WRITING HAS TOUCHED ANOTHER :)
A former member wrote: I like it. Has so much depth.
A former member wrote: Sounds like you stand alone in this... there is a strength in going it alone, it takes a certain amount of self reliance to even try... I like the simplicity of this...
On Thursday, December 12, 2013, infinitebeing (80) wrote:

THANK U FOR UR APPRECIATION ON MY WRITE :)
On Thursday, December 12, 2013, megaprime81 (743) wrote:

Great job. Very well written. 10