**DROWNING**
By infinitebeing
Sinking slowly
Drowning me
Gasping for air
Grasping for hope
Heavy chains
Weighing me down
Straight to the bottom
Without a sound....
ALL YOU FAT
CHATTERING FACES
EATING ME
BEATING ME
HELPING ME DROWN.
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Copyright 2013 infinitebeing
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On Saturday, December 14, 2013, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
thank u for the slight smile i recieved from reading ur comment... i needed that :)
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On Saturday, December 14, 2013, haunted
(837) wrote:
awesome, at first I thought this sounded like really bad anxiety but then the mood changes and becomes darker, and that's a beautiful thing. nice!!
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On Friday, December 13, 2013, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
IT FEELS GOOD TO KNOW MY WRITING HAS TOUCHED ANOTHER :)
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A former member wrote:
I like it. Has so much depth.
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A former member wrote:
Sounds like you stand alone in this... there is a strength in going it alone, it takes a certain amount of self reliance to even try... I like the simplicity of this...
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On Thursday, December 12, 2013, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
THANK U FOR UR APPRECIATION ON MY WRITE :)
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On Thursday, December 12, 2013, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Great job. Very well written. 10