**DROWNING**

By infinitebeing

Sinking slowly
Drowning me
Gasping for air
Grasping for hope
Heavy chains
Weighing me down
Straight to the bottom
Without a sound....



                                     ALL  YOU FAT
                                       CHATTERING FACES
                                          EATING ME
                                             BEATING ME
                                                 HELPING ME DROWN.

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Copyright 2013 infinitebeing
Published on Thursday, December 12, 2013.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • infinitebeing On Saturday, December 14, 2013, infinitebeing (80)By person wrote:

    thank u for the slight smile i recieved from reading ur comment... i needed that :)

  • haunted On Saturday, December 14, 2013, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    awesome, at first I thought this sounded like really bad anxiety but then the mood changes and becomes darker, and that's a beautiful thing. nice!!

  • infinitebeing On Friday, December 13, 2013, infinitebeing (80)By person wrote:

    IT FEELS GOOD TO KNOW MY WRITING HAS TOUCHED ANOTHER :)

  • A former member wrote: I like it. Has so much depth.

  • A former member wrote: Sounds like you stand alone in this... there is a strength in going it alone, it takes a certain amount of self reliance to even try... I like the simplicity of this...

  • infinitebeing On Thursday, December 12, 2013, infinitebeing (80)By person wrote:

    THANK U FOR UR APPRECIATION ON MY WRITE :)

  • megaprime81 On Thursday, December 12, 2013, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Great job. Very well written. 10

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