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MY MONSTER
By infinitebeing
My monster has many names
It feeds through my veins
It lives in my mind
Idling all my time.
My monster whispers in my ear
Reminding me of all my fears
Memories replayed in my head
Until my monster is spoon-fed.
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Copyright 2013 infinitebeing
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On Monday, January 14, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(867)
wrote:
An original spoof of the monster metaphor. Short but meaningful. :)
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A former member wrote:
I can relate to this on many levels.
Short and sweet. Well put to get the point across.
Thank you.
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On Thursday, January 2, 2014, Intoxicating Delirium
(275) wrote:
I always love the short ones. We all have our monsters and feed them we do.. Great write :)
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A former member wrote:
awesome man short but sweet
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On Wednesday, January 1, 2014, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
Sometimes short and sweet is all u need to get ur point across
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A former member wrote:
Your writing 👠the level of techniques😱 genuinely a marvelous artist I salute u my favorite things to read are your pieces of art.. I intellectually applaud you 😋
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On Wednesday, January 1, 2014, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
Greatly appreciated :)
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A former member wrote:
I love this.......your demons are very entrancing...
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On Saturday, December 14, 2013, haunted
(850) wrote:
yes I agree, the spoon houses many monsters. ive seen friends struggle with that addiction and because of that I will never fuck with heroin or any thing else that's labeled heaven in a syringe. I see what it does, I wish you could of saw that, but we walk other paths and because of these paths we become who we are. and fuck people that judge our past, its people like that, that make us feel like we'll never make it out. but its all up to us to make that choice, that huge fucking decision to give it up. its hard as hell, and I hope your strength stays strong, life is much better with out the dope, as im sure you know. i hope this didn't sound like a lecture, but then again, take it how you want, cause you know whats up miss infinite. and I care. awesome poem.
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On Saturday, December 7, 2013, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
self inflicted pain can be a pleasuring release... i understand.
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A former member wrote:
My monster I have failed with fighting is my need to feel pain not caused by others.
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On Saturday, December 7, 2013, darkheartmagic
(82) wrote:
outstanding I like your style
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A former member wrote:
I have been there. Definitely can relate.
Thank you.
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On Saturday, December 7, 2013, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
thank u... we r one in the same my friend...
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On Friday, September 27, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
My monster is a hungry beast continually needing to be fed:)~ Love this poem* Welcome to DP ~^_^~
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On Saturday, December 7, 2013, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
yes the feeding continues and has been for some time.
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A former member wrote:
I enjoyed reading this. I was able to relate to it as it brought my own memories and feeling into play. Good job! :)
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On Thursday, September 26, 2013, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
im glad u were able to appreciate the depth of this write thank u
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