Comments by dwells
- "Marvelous metaphor for the complexity that she not doubt is indeed, inspired Cadymae, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "The Unbinding" by cadymae
- "Roadway romance in the big rigs, what a concept! Thanks for the eye-opener with this slice of life, cheers to you Cadymae!"
Posted by dwells on "The Itinerant Mistress" by cadymae
- "Nobody escapes the final ending, or is it really the end? And are we actually that individual, or just perhaps imagined so? Does the butterfly know the caterpillar? Cheers CM, much enjoyed the natural equivalence."
Posted by dwells on "Fecundity" by cadymae
- "Great, but the last line was a bit of a let down. Perhaps something like "Yet I watch the bruise take shape" or something better than either one. This was so close,.. thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Yet I'll still regret" by cadymae
- "This was fantastic and the colors took things to another level. A fine line between criticality and meanness perhaps? Thanks and well done."
Posted by dwells on "Eggplant" by cadymae
- "Terrific invasive species mid stanza. A weed is a plant growing in the wrong place - much the same. Let them dig it up and plant a replacement. Morons in South Florida cut down all the beautiful Australian Pine trees - same mentality, but probably somebody got paid a big federal grant to do the unwanted and unnecessary demolition. Still pissed! Oh, and thanks for this offering."
Posted by dwells on "Xmas Music" by cadymae
