Comments by dwells
- "wondering now if there's any connection with a MIss Schuggenah I once new TS, but my Yiddish is sketchy.
Terriffic job here on both the macro and micro scales of humanity, hopeful youth, and the give and take of society when consequences get in the way. Very tongue and cheek and it just kept getting better. Cheers and happy holidays! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Miss Schengen" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "A heartfelt and elegant tribute to a father (we only get one). I started writing poetry almost 10 years ago after my dad died. Mom is still my biggest fan, but I have to censor much of my stuff. Thanks for sharing these very personal snapshot that made him come alive for us; if only in the words of a loving son - cheers, Dan"
Posted by dwells on "A good old man" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "Quite the dilemma you conjured up for this challenge TS and the "who is really being punished", most insightful. Did you try to cleave the head with a single blow I wonder? (works with zombies) - well done and best of luck."
Posted by dwells on "Endless Restoration " by TropicalSnowstorm
- "One of the fringe benefits of owning a gift shop I'd guess; going back for another gander TS and wonder what the driver looks like (guessing some Cheech and Chong look-alike)."
Posted by dwells on "Never Apologize" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "That's the kind of history lesson we'll never get in school TS. The old makes way for the new (or sometimes just the old in another iteration). You set a fine stage and the closing metaphor lent a pensive tone to ponder."
Posted by dwells on "Topkapi" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "Your author's note helped to define this over-powering sense of loss. Keep the memories close - they are our treasures, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Faces" by TropicalSnowstorm
