Comments by Gray Vision

  • "Some times these flash backs come out of no where, but to die is something else. It seems like you're really going through some hard times or the worst has come and gone I hope. Do not let others put you down, "nothing I do is ever good enough" maybe not to them, but if you tried, really tried, that's good enough for me, I don't care what anyone else thinks. Take care of yourself and try not to dwell in this place you wrote of, thank you for sharing, I know this piece took alot out of you. "
    Posted by Gray Vision on "Faces" by SulaMoon
  • "That's beautiful Sula, enjoy the small things in life beacuse one day when you look back at them, they might have been big things. I think you've come to terms with this, thank you for sharing =) "
    Posted by Gray Vision on "From the depths" by SulaMoon
  • "I've always been strong willed, something that most of my friends don't understand. This peice has inspired me to write something new that I'll surely post in time. Thanks for sharing =)"
    Posted by Gray Vision on "The Beast" by SulaMoon
  • "It really confirms the saying, "Once you're in war it never ends." We really need to pay our respects to the individuals who suffer through those horrific times. Thank you for sharing all of your works thus far =)"
    Posted by Gray Vision on "PTSD" by SulaMoon
  • "It's sad to see this happen and the person doing it knows all to well what they are doing most the time, but they just don't care. How can someone not dwell on vengence in a case like this, it takes a strong individual to simply forgive in this sence and hopefully move on. Thank you for sharing =)"
    Posted by Gray Vision on "Bloody Heart" by SulaMoon
  • "Wow, simply wow... there's so much power in this piece, a wish hu? If the person in this peice is you, I will say this I'm proud to have found you or rather you finding me. I remember when my works took this route, but then I thought that I'd shed some light here on DP to show individuals like yourself that you're not alone and things will get better with time. Thank you for sharing this peice with us, it means alot."
    Posted by Gray Vision on "A Wish" by SulaMoon
  • "You know this could be a reference to multiple things as you mentioned schizophenia, something that I would never have guessed. upon reading this piece I was thinking about drugs more so and the hold it has on its victims, it was only when I got near the end of this read I started to think otherwise in the sence of messed up individuals or mental illnesses in this case. This definately makes for an intriguing discussion, raises many questions and concerns good job here. Thank you so much for sharing =)"
    Posted by Gray Vision on "Duplicitous" by SulaMoon
  • "This was a journey from beginning to end, a drepressing begining ending with some hope, the hope of over comming this state of depression and regret that sparked this entire ordeal to begin with. Well done and thank you for sharing yet again another wonderful piece =)"
    Posted by Gray Vision on "True Friend" by SulaMoon
  • "I've had this happen to me but it's extremely rare in my case, even so when it happens it really ruins my day since my body is use to getting it's full 7- 8 hrs of sleep. Great write my friend, I'm definately looking forward to checking out what else you have posted on here. Write on =)"
    Posted by Gray Vision on "Insomnia" by SulaMoon
  • "I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, despite it having a sad tone I thought it was very well written. I feel as though I appreciate it all the more because it rhymed and most of my own work rhymes as well. Thank you for sharing such an amazing write with us here on DP =)"
    Posted by Gray Vision on "Sweet Relief" by SulaMoon
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