Comments by Lylani

  • "Reading this through again with yours and Narcissa's comments and interpretation, added a whole new dimension to this work for me. As when I wrote it I intended the title as in, You can't teach an old dog new tricks - There are some lovers that get past your defenses and once they're there you can't then learn to not feel for them. Thank you for sharing your thoughts its so enlightening to see others responses to my work"
    Posted by Lylani on "Old dog" by Lylani
  • "No I don't think I'm remotely pure, but sometimes I wake up an optimist and a romantic. But more often I crave experience and give no thought to morals."
    Posted by Lylani on "Water Cycle" by Lylani
  • "Despite a few technical difficulties hence the time delay, as requested I've put my photo (with my son John) back up on my profile "
    Posted by Lylani on "Reaching For Daydreams" by Lylani
  • "Thank you... yes very real at the moment, so real in fact that if he were here I may start throwing crockery at him, but then again if he were here I wouldn't need to lol "
    Posted by Lylani on "A little warning from mummy to father" by Lylani
  • "Yeah we really do, I guess that's why I enjoy reading your work so much. I think its good for the page and a little less good for our emotional well being"
    Posted by Lylani on "Seeing Sense" by Lylani
  • "Thank you, this was actually mostly constructed out of the bits I edited out of Never Ever After. After someone made a comment about that being hopeful I was determined to write a more hopeless piece and now I've managed affection -dammit, I guess it just goes to show that no matter what some people do you never entirely stop caring no matter how much you try."
    Posted by Lylani on "Seeing Sense" by Lylani
  • "I think spikedwithLUST got closest to what i intended though all interpretation is valid, just thinking you can write such beautiful poetry about sad things and sometimes all the beauty eclipses the heart of what made you sad... if that makes sense "
    Posted by Lylani on "simply..." by Lylani
  • "OMG that is so weird I just saw that headline on my way home. I always think everyone here is from the states, nice to find a local (I'm from Haywards Heath by the way)"
    Posted by Lylani on "The Arrogance of Strangers" by Lylani
  • "oops spelling corrected, thanks for the complement tis much appreciated, I usually avoid writing anything with a rhyme as I usually end up in such a muddle that I end up with nonsensical drivel. "
    Posted by Lylani on "Monologue of a Muse" by Lylani
  • "I don't think it needs tangible reasons or lables - I think it's something that is completly inexplixable but is sometimes glipsed in tangible moments"
    Posted by Lylani on "Love is Wordless" by Lylani
  • "Oops,I was having connection problems yesterday & by my 3rd attempt to post this, it lost all the formatting & I forgot to add a title- think its all sorted now doh!"
    Posted by Lylani on "Moving on" by Lylani
  • "Thank you all for such complementary comments, I didn't think I'd hidden the ending that well but it seems I had better than I thought.Thank you also for such a warm welcome to DP "
    Posted by Lylani on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
  • "I know I'm guilty of that too, sometimes its too hard to admit the way you feel about someone because you know it will ruin whatever it is you have with them even if what you have is not all you want it to be"
    Posted by Lylani on "Role play" by Lylani
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