Comments by Aleas

  • "That's certainly one way to look at such things. This reminded me of someone in an insane asylum, hunched in fetal position in the corner, muttering to herself these things while picking apart her hair and face. The psych tech comes in with the syringe ':` "no fear", and then bam, the screen goes black."
    Posted by Aleas on "11 days more of heartbeats" by estherbell
  • "Paved the way, I feel the same. One day, though, we'll open our eyes to a new face to dream about, without the burden of a love lost hanging over our shoulder. That chip will fall, and on that day we'll feel lighter than air. One day..."
    Posted by Aleas on "To a Friend who I fell in love with." by estherbell
  • "There's something to be said about this despondent self torture. Someone once told me we only escape the fire to run back to the ladder. A vicious cycle that we run so often that making any other decision is just too difficult to handle, too much of a change, even if that change is for the better, because when we make that change, that's when we truly realize we are alone. Without what lost physically, and now, gone emotionally. Where do we go next? I hope you make it to your beautiful poem someday."
    Posted by Aleas on "A drunken rant about heartbreak,vomiting,and an answer to "A"." by estherbell
  • "Venus fly trap! Beautiful, enchanting, magnetic...then all the sudden your insides are being drained through some sort of oriface that didn't exist before. Unfortunately though, this guy (or girl) will eat some grass, puke up the pieces they couldn't digest, and move on their merry. Son of a B, I wish it didnt work that way."
    Posted by Aleas on "Your 6th deadly sin" by estherbell
  • "Funny how these things go. I just read this work, after finding you commenting on my work, and it's the same exact thing. Like reading a mirror. I guess everyone goes through this, although for some reason, it feels like only we are the ones that own sorrow, depression, loss, etc., like some sort of monopoly on pain. And that makes the feeling that much more lonely, and everyone else seem that much more confusing."
    Posted by Aleas on "A love full of hate" by estherbell
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