Comments by Trigger
- "This is unlike your normal style. Refreshing really. I like the atmosphere to it, well portreyed. It was dismal, yet, strangely uplifting... at least for me. "Green light" just as everything fell through... such is life. Kep it up, this is good. -Trigger"
Posted by Trigger on "Mother Russia" by Lawless Fighter
- "WTF!?!? This is spectacular!!! I was laughing my ass off the whole time! I just can't wait to see what you say about the jews..."
Posted by Trigger on "Genesis. . ." by Lawless Fighter
- "The last 2 lines are, for me, the best. This was a good piece. It has a cool meloncholy to it, with a taste of pain. This is nice. Keep it up."
Posted by Trigger on "Dawn's Breeze" by Lawless Fighter
- "Knowing you, I expected to look at this and find nothing, a blank page with a title, but this was a really fun write, despite the couple spelling errors. It is almost a parody written on writing itself, nice."
Posted by Trigger on "The Blank Paper" by Lawless Fighter
- "I like Darkness as a pronoun. This is good, better than the origanal, I think. My favourite line was 16, that was good. And I'm still loving the concept. Darkness as a lover... hmm..."
Posted by Trigger on "Darkness Still Loves Me" by Lawless Fighter
- "I'll be honest... the title made me think "EMO!" And then I remembered, you hate emo. This is a good piece throughout. The theme is very interesting, darkness as a lover... hmm..."
Posted by Trigger on "Darkness Loves Me" by Lawless Fighter
- "The ending made me smile. This worries me... but you have a good piece here, the ending almost reminds me of 'Heirate Mich.' My only complaints were a couple of grammatical errors, but other than that, a good piece."
Posted by Trigger on "As you sleep" by Lawless Fighter
