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Comments by carlosjackal

"All I can say is this is yet another fantastic piece from your rusty nail. Write the hell on.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "upon a cross of dreams [with a crown of metaphors]" by Six-Out

"This was the sound of a slow, bleeding heart, silently screaming across distance, desperate to make up the miles between you and your 'never-could've-been.' 2 poems in a week? I hope you keep this up, Amigo, you don't post often enough."
Posted by carlosjackal on "as hammers sleep [blunt force trauma to the heart]" by Six-Out

"*night"
Posted by carlosjackal on "a soundtrack to the home of forgotten dreams." by Six-Out

""and I smiled. for the first time that." The perfect end to a perfect empathy poem. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "a soundtrack to the home of forgotten dreams." by Six-Out

"Magical and wondrous."
Posted by carlosjackal on "railroads and coastlines" by Six-Out

"..but you shall pick yourself up. This poem showed a strength in revealing weakness which made it beautiful. Keep writing, dude.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "crumbling.saints [twenty two and ten]" by Six-Out

"A perfect tribute. Write on, brother.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Nevermind" by Six-Out

"Words fail me. Except to say, Falling in love is so easy when caught in moments like that you describe, but, man, how it can paralyse us, too. I hope you come back with some more stuff soon."
Posted by carlosjackal on "hopelessly.poetic." by Six-Out

"This is an amazing outsider poem. You can feel the desolation seeping in black and white from between the lines and the colours of desperation in the protaganist's graffiti art. Loved it."
Posted by carlosjackal on "bathroom.stall [graffiti]" by Six-Out

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